Summary: After the Rings of the Khazad are finished, Sauron turns to other works; the Elven-Rings are completed; the third time is the charm for the errand-rider of Lindon; Sauron makes the One Ring; and Sauron comes to Celebrimbor for an encounter with a shattering conclusion.
Story Warnings: Slash, Graphic Sex, BDSM, Practices Considered Pagan. Rated NC-17.
Characters: Celebrimbor, Sauron, Aranwë, Pengolod, all the elven-smiths.
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Part
1. The Meaning of Mírdain.
After
the night's ritual was through, the round hall of the Mírdain felt
diminished. The smoky air was cooling after an intense hour of song and
spirit-calling, all focused on the Rings of the Dwarves. The lamps had burned
down irregularly, some blown dark, and a few forgotten items littered the
floor's edge, a pair of sandals, a crumpled wrap. All the Mírdain who had
aided the ritual had left to eat after fasting, and maybe to embrace the beloved
after celibacy. Only the chief of the ritual's sorcerers remained, Annatar and
Celebrimbor.
Annatar
stepped up to the stone plinth that had been placed in the centre of the Mírdain's
round hall, and picked up one of the seven jewels that lay upon it. The ring
that he caressed between thumb and finger was alive with power, an earthy heat
and glow. Within the mithril and gold of the ring's setting, a changeable gem
flashed, to represent all the different kinds of wealth that might gladden a
dwarf's heart. The rings of Men had been simpler, each with an amethyst in a
setting of sleek steel, the most mortal of metals.
Celebrimbor
leaned on the edge of the plinth, exhausted but still controlling, as he had
been throughout the ritual. Silently, he held his hand out to Annatar, and
Annatar gave him the ring. Celebrimbor placed it on the plinth with the others,
then began to wrap them, one by one, in tiny suede bags.
"Once
we have completed the Elf-Rings, we will bestow them," said Celebrimbor, "to
the folk of the Blue Mountains, the Iron Hills, and of Khazad-dûm."
Annatar
knew why they waited. The rings were great now, but their full potency would
spring to life when the Elves wore their rings. "Tell me again how the
Elf-Rings give the jewels for the mortals even greater virtue." He wanted to
be absolutely certain he understood, before he began his own work, making one
ring to rule them all. He had exerted as little of his power as possible that
night, just enough to add the hook of his own will to the Dwarf-Rings. Let the
Elves weary and bind themselves to this making!
"The
other rings bear a gift, a dream, our good will. But the Elven-Rings will fulfil
our own desires, and of course we feel these most keenly. The wish is greater;
the will for their making is greater; and we will draw most deeply of ourselves
for them. The fire we place in them shall be returned to us threefold. So too
our good will shall be magnified, and the mortals' rings shall reflect
that." Celebrimbor was tranquil as he spoke, confident after completing the
second Ring-making. "Yea, all the children of Arda shall be united as never
before; the Firstborn, and the Secondborn, and the folk of Aulë."
"More
of your selves," mulled Annatar.
"Yes.
But we do this with all our works. The very word "Mírdain" has two
meanings; jewel-smith, and jewel-men, jewel-people. The word for a smith or
maker is the same as that for a person in the very highest sense. It is what
separates the children of Illúvatar from the goodly beasts, that we think and
make and are aware. Thus in a sense we Mírdain are the same as our works."
Annatar held back from rolling his eyes at Celebrimbor's words. Elves were
prone to these flights of etymology, one of their many distractions.
Setting
the Rings aside, Celebrimbor came up to Annatar and grasped his shoulders.
"Never more true than with you, fair one, man of gold. Many wonders have you
wrought, and your own self fairest among them."
He kissed the Maia, soft and lingering, then asked, "Do you truly have
to leave Eregion - to leave me?"
Annatar's
face was shadowed in the dimming hall, and he answered, "Yes. I have said
before that am not just here to aid the Elves. The first two parts of your work
are done, and you are on the path to power. Thus I would turn to ordering other
realms."
Celebrimbor
asked, "Where do you go? To Lindon? The High King might receive you better
there, now." He did not mention Lorinánd in the South, where Galadriel now
dwelt, even though he had reckoned it as one of the high-elf realms in his count
of the Elven-Rings.
"Many
men dwell to the south, around a place they call Lake Núrnen," said Annatar.
"The
south-men are savage. You go from the highest to the lowest," said
Celebrimbor, scathingly. "It would be better to go over Sea, and take counsel
with the high men of Númenor."
"That
is a fair idea. I will do that when the time is best. Yet order should touch
everyone. I see it in Eregion; you are governed with ease, the great work has
gone forth with the focus of many of your Mírdain. You have learned as much as
I can teach you. And I have learned as much as you have to give."
Celebrimbor
embraced Annatar, remembering the first time he had taken the Maia in his arms,
in this very spot in the hall. He had known for long years that this day would
come. He would lose the wisdom that had mentored him, the power that had knelt
before him, the lithe being who had warmed him many lonely nights, even without
love. "Even if you go soon, tell me; were the lessons I gave you sweet?"
Celebrimbor knew better than to ask for an expression of care from Annatar. It
seemed to be against some high principle the Maia held.
So
it was an unexpected delight to feel the Maia twine deeper into his embrace,
like a serpent seeking to warm itself against his crevices. "Ah, Celebrimbor.
My time in Eregion has been far more to my desiring than you will ever know."
Annatar drew back and, for an instant, twined Celebrimbor's silver forelock
like a mithril ring around one of his tawny fingers. "Perhaps I shall return,
if my works allow it," the Maia murmured.
Part
2. An Errand-Rider's Return.
As
Celebrimbor prepared to dive into the cold spring-pool, he stopped and looked
along the westward road. There, as many times before, the horn-call of Lindon
rang, loud and glad for the first trading party of the spring. After the Council
and Celebrimbor had sent messages of fealty and peace to the High King,
Gil-Galad, Lindon had continued trade and exchange with Eregion. The court of
Lindon dealt chiefly with Celebrimbor. The official word about this was that the
ever-changing Council was "less convenient," but Celebrimbor thought that
Gil-Galad enforced his own lordship by clinging to the older way.
His
keen eyes picked out the party on the grey stone road through the holly groves.
Of twenty-three riders and one empty horse (either a spare or the steed of
someone slain on the road), twenty-two and the horse turned toward Ost-in-Edhil,
where the Council of Eregion worked and the markets were held. The twenty-third
rider turned southwards, to the lowlands of Eregion. Celebrimbor peered at the
rider, but could tell little about him or her, save that they were clad in
sage-green, and riding on a piebald horse. A loremaster, by the guild-colours,
riding to where Celeborn had his house among the sheltered oak-groves. He smiled
wryly.
Being
the ostensible ruler of Eregion had taught Celebrimbor much. Now he was the one
who had subtle workings going on behind his back, and those who were
dissatisfied with the Council and Celebrimbor turned to the former ruler in his
lowland house. He had known for a long time that Gil-Galad kept Celeborn in his
counsels, even that he received messages that did not come to Ost-in-Edhil. He
put it about that he was aware and disregarded Celeborn anyway, but he kept an
eye on the thick groves of the lowlands, nonetheless.
Celebrimbor shook his head to clear his thoughts, then plunged into the deep spring-pool. The water was clear, and at the bottom, he found what he sought, and then swam upwards, reaching the top of the water with a gasp. He pulled up to the side of the pool and opened one clenched hand. A ring of mithril and adamant glittered there, as bright as the water in the sun. "Well met," he said, shaking the drops of water from the jewel that would soon be a completed Elven-Ring.
Its making had been long and slow, seventy-five years since he had bid a fond farewell to Annatar. Three times had the jewel rested in the spring to draw in all the water's virtues and powers. Two times had the Elves sung and chanted over the Ring of Water. In two days, at the Elvish New Year, they would finish the work. He had already retrieved the Ring of Air from its high perch in the mountains, where it had taken in the powers of the breeze and light. The Ring of Fire rested by a brazier in the Mirdain's main hall, always kept lit and guarded by the apprentices. Celebrimbor hauled himself out of the water, shivering in the cold of the early days of April. Spring never came as early as one might think, in the chill highlands of Eregion.
The
next day, the piebald mare and her rider took the highland road again, up to the
stables of the Mírdain. The rider was a persuasive fellow; though there had
been no word of his coming, the stable-master agreed to let the horse remain
there a day or two.
He
went with the hostlers to see her set in a stable, and nicked a section of apple
from another horse's feed as a treat for his own mare. "You piebalds are
always good luck for me," said Pengolod, feeding her the apple from his
ink-stained hand, black and white like the horse. "So give me what fortune you
can, eh?" The horse licked his hand, then bumped it away.
He
paused in the main foyer, marvelling at the latest work on display. It was a
tall crystal urn rippled and faceted like the shimmering Sea, filled with wild
rose-canes in bloom. At first he thought the flowers more wonders of the
glassblower's work, but when he stepped up for a closer look, the fragrance of
the living roses came to him. He touched a petal and wondered where the Mírdain
had found the flowers of summer in the cold start of spring. Pleased to have a
question to start a conversation with, he hurried on his way.
Pengolod
never forgot anything he had learned, and he remembered the way to Aranwë's
jeweler's studio. Gratifyingly, his friend of before was there, even at a
similar work, setting an onyx cameo into the hilt-knob of a sword.
"You
are as fixed in place as one of your anvils, Aranwë," Pengolod teased, in the
old language of Gondolin. "Don't you ever leave?"
Aranwë
looked up with a start, and spoke defensively. "You are fortunate to find me
here this day. At this time of year, many of us go prospecting, before - wait
a moment. I should be asking you if you ever stay home, rider of Lindon! What
brings you to us again?"
Pengolod
laughed, "Taking writings and messages about. And I have your book at last, a
little late, I admit," he said, handing over a volume bound in red leather. He
stayed silent about the rest of his errand and the messages Gil-Galad had
finally seen fit to have him carry to Celeborn. This was the house of the
Mírdain, after all. As Aranwë took the book with praise and leafed through the
pages, Pengolod added, "See, at the front, there is a list of all the matters
you will find in the book, and each page is marked by a number, that you may
seek it swiftly. What is so funny?"
"Just
that each of us has our arts, and what is fine craft to one may be un-noticed by
another," said Aranwë. "So it is well that you tell me how your work
excels."
"I
excel at many works, my old city-mate," said Pengolod, voice edged with
insinuation, "and some of them I need naught but my loremaster's tongue to
show you, if you will."
The
other elf-man looked away at that. Pengolod cursed himself for squandering a
third try with haste, and spoke lightly to cover his dismay. "I may not be
thrawn enough for your tastes, and I can understand…" He fell quiet at the
expression Aranwë bore when he glanced up.
"You
are fairer than you reckon, Pengolod," said the smith, moving a few things
around uselessly on the work-table. "But I wonder what you merit in me, that
you turn to me so. You of all people know what a knave I once was."
"And
as you hear me now, you know what a fool I am. A fine match." Then Pengolod
changed his tone. "This we share; we are both shadowed by the past. I am not
that foolish to not see it in you." Aranwë nodded, drawn in by his
seriousness. "It is with someone who remembers as I do that I can be released
from memory, for a time, and draw close rather than feeling riven. What say
you?"
"Hm,"
Aranwë muttered. "Well. Hm. I'd be a knave again to refuse you, and I have
no wish to do that."
Pengolod
caught the smith's hand in his, and bowed over it smiling. Before he could
choose a riposte to the tangled acceptance, Aranwë continued.
"But one matter stands between us. All of us Mírdain are being
celibate right now; a great rite is planned —"
"All
of you?" Pengolod stood back, hands on his hips. "Every last one? 'Tis a
plot. A conspiracy. An ill fate is on me!"
Aranwë
began to laugh, merrier than Pengolod had seen him in Eregion. "Not so ill;
the ritual is tomorrow, and then we are freed." He explained the work the
Gwaith-i-Mírdain would do, fixing the last of their power into the great
Elven-Rings that would gentle the passing of time and aid the other peoples.
At
these words, Pengolod remembered something. "In your entry-hall, I saw the
roses of summer out of season. Is this an enchantment of those Rings?"
"No,
we made some lesser rings, as practice of the spells of time-warding," said Aranwë,
holding out his left hand; there was a plain band of mingled steel and gold
there, without a gem. "Those flowers have stood there for ten years, if you
will credit it."
"Do
they grow?" asked Pengolod.
"No,
they remain perfect forever."
Pengolod
continued to puzzle over this. "What if you took them and grafted them onto a
rose plant? Would the flower come to fruit, then?"
"We
have not tried," said Aranwë.
Pengolod
frowned at this, thinking it strange and sterile, then decided to say no more
for the nonce, with an assignation to plan. "How soon after your ritual will
you be freed? Or do I ask too much?" he
said, giving Aranwë an arch, hopeful look.
Part
3. All Our Will.
All
was ready to complete the Elven-Rings.
Celebrimbor
looked about the round hall of the Mírdain, ringed about in concourse, as it
often was. Smoke traced through the air, bearing the incense that they had all
come to associate with these rituals of power. The crowd of Mírdain was waiting
orderly, each singer in a specific place marked by the timbre of their voice,
ready for Celebrimbor to begin conducting the ritual. The stone plinth had been
placed in the hall's midst and draped in black silk, the rings shining upon it
like three stars. The Mírdain had lavished all their craft and love upon them,
more than on the other rings, even going so far as to name them like favoured
weapons; Nenya, Vilya, Narya. Extra lamps had been suspended above the centre,
so that the rings were in a pool of brilliance.
Celebrimbor,
in a long black cloak and the red tunic of the Mírdain, was drastically
shadowed, the strong bones of his face carved dark where they blocked the light
from above. He felt himself held separate in the light, as his lordship and his
sorcerous power, much gained from Annatar, held him above the other Mírdain.
When he looked outside the pool of lamplight where he stood, it was hard to
distinguish the Mírdain from each other amidst the shadowy crowd. He would have
been hard put to pin a name to a face. But they were his people, there to aid
him, and he loved them for it.
The
Rings were the centre of his vision, the heart of the hall, soon to be the heart
of Eregion, even of elf-kind. He held his hands spread above the Rings, feeling
the power they already carried, and saw all the Mírdain turn to him in ready
silence. They had sung as they cast the Rings, sung as they polished their
stones chosen from amongst thousands, and they were ready to sing more now.
The
ritual did not begin with any hallowing or call to the Valar. Annatar had
claimed that to do so made the things of power less linked to the Elves' will,
and more to the fates, and said that he thought the Elves were sacred in and of
themselves. Some had been charmed by that, and some consoled, to hear such a
thing from a Maia - it must be true, then.
Celebrimbor
sang the first notes, with words urging all to give of the spirit within them
for the ritual, to call on all their will and love, their art and force, to
bring it forth in song. A pure tenor on one side let his voice ring out, met by
an alto woman's voice of nearly the same note. One by one, a lower voice and a
higher one joined the song, until even the richest and most silvery singers had
joined the music.
The
singers' words commanded the will of the earth, bound fast the sight of the
stars of heaven, demanded obedience of plant and stone and water, calling it all
to serve their will by enduring in beauty. The song changed into more of a chant
as the words of its heart were repeated, the sound growing more beautiful with
each new utterance. They called it on, drew it in, fixed it to them, gave it to
the one who would give it to the Rings.
As
the chant rose, it took on a note beyond any other song, the echo of the music
of the Ainur that Annatar had given them. The rhythm would have been harsh and
clamorous, had it not been sung by so many fair voices, and with such a loving
will behind it, force driven by desire, calling on.
Celebrimbor
felt the song pierce him with its power, sweet as being filled and pierced in
passion. The sensation was as beyond lust as the greatest love was beyond
fondness; alight, alive with all the desire of the most passionate Elves,
engulfing him with the flame of Anor. He flung his head back and spread his arms
to the side, letting himself take all the power, even to the traces of the
singers' very selves.
The
song reached its depth and height, every voice at its peak, and the
stained-glass roof above trembled, its rattle unheard. The concourse fell silent
at Celebrimbor's gesture, and when the echo of their clamour faded, and he
sang the last keen, triumphant cantrip, emptying himself of breath as he gave
all the joyous energy that flooded him to the Rings below his hands. So great
was the strength of that hour that, at the last ecstatic note, there was a flash
of white light about the jewels.
After
the flash, a strange tranquillity rippled through the hall, then spread out
through the corridors, into the night. A breath of timelessness refreshed the
air, lightening the burden of change. The Mírdain savoured it in silence, every
face open with wonder. Their greatest making worked.
Celebrimbor
turned up from where he stooped over the three treasures, all the peace and
triumph in his face, and when he straightened, all their shared pride was in his
stance. He looked around at the unity in the hall.
"Thank
you," he said, and bowed.
All
bowed in return.
On
the side, he heard one Mírdain whisper, "Is this what it felt like - in
Aman?"
"Very
close," one said.
"Good
enough for me," said a second, and a few laughed at that; then a few more. The
silence was not broken, but flowed into a gentle sound of joy, chatter and
wonder. Celebrimbor basked in the centre, smiling at all, speaking to none,
hovering over the precious things he had made. It had been worth all the change
and the striving and the outpouring, he thought, worth the difficult changes in
Eregion.
And
the Elven-Rings were complete in that hour.
Part
4. Past Perfect.
Eregion
had a cold climate. The quarters of many of the Mírdain were scattered amongst
their workshops, lofts above rooms, chambers tucked to one side, so that they
might be warmed by the small furnaces fired for their crafts. So it was with Aranwë,
whose chamber was aside the workshop he managed. When he entered through the
shop, he barred the workshop's door, then added another shovel of charcoal to
the low-banked furnace. The embers cast the only light into the equipment-filled
room, with its tall work-table and its benches.
The
time-lightening engendered by the Elven-Rings was still in the air, new enough
to sense. Aranwë turned to the elf who sat silently by the window. "You could
have added more to the fire, if you wished. It took me many a year to get beyond
how we husbanded charcoal in Gondolin," he said to Pengolod. "Were you bored
waiting?"
"Listening
to your ritual's song? Do not look so surprised; yes, I heard it. I dare say
every elf alive in Middle-Earth did, and every houseless spirit." Pengolod had
drifted over to where Aranwë stood, in front of the furnace's mouth. Aranwë
was relieved that Pengolod's mein was quiet and serious, a match for his own,
still limned with the energy of the ritual. He had been too proud to reveal his
eagerness for this hour. Before Pengolod could change the mood with distracting
conversation, he sealed his mouth to the loremaster's.
Much
about how it might be between lovers can be divined from one kiss. Pengolod's
mouth was as fresh as a draught of living brook-water, soft and strong. In a
light embrace, their bodies fit together better than either had expected.
"So,
d'you think we Lambengolmor are well named?" asked Pengolod.
"Yes,"
Aranwë rasped, his voice raw after the singing, breath drained by the kiss.
"What would you have of me? You have not said." And I have been too craven
to ask, he thought.
Pengolod
started back. "I …what would you wish?"
"I
would please you," said Aranwë.
"And
I would do the same," said Pengolod, smiling a little at their impasse.
Aranwë
fell back on manners. "You are the guest, here, and the first word should be
yours."
Pengolod
inhaled, and his voice fell deeper than was his wont. "I want you to take me.
I have heard your dark tales, Aranwë; I know well what you smiths are like!"
Aranwë
ran a finger under the collar of the Mírdain around his own neck. He did not
know whether to regret the wine he had drunk after the ritual, or wish he had
downed more. He had pictured himself serving the lean, handsome elf-man, showing
him how much he might ask for, and instead…
"Very
well; to please you, I shall take you as I would be taken myself," he said.
"No
greater kindness to another," said Pengolod, looking pleased and steadfast,
then half-laughing, "I even brought a phial of oil."
Aranwë
winced, and weighed the moment. He strengthened his grip on Pengolod's
shoulders, and shook his head. Leaning down, he tasted Pengolod's mouth again,
drawing the loremaster's head back by his long hair, backing him against the
table. "Those phials are better to look at than to use. They always run
out," said Aranwë, between kisses. "Nor can I close the wretched stoppers
again with slippery hands." He slid one leg between Pengolod's limbs. "And
the oil spills and stains all. Knave I may be, but I have something far better
to ease our way." The loremaster was agreeably breathless by the time Aranwë
turned away to find the sword-grease the smiths had long adapted for such hours.
By
the time he turned around and span a stoneware jar down onto the table, Pengolod
had started to disrobe, showing himself lean and lithe, muscles honed tight by
his errand-riding. Aranwë fought back the urge to fall to his knees and caress the virile grace revealed
from top to toe, staying standing as he ran his hands over the other elf-man. He
stood still as Pengolod assessed him in turn with a touch across his crotch.
"True what they say about you tall ones, and about smith's tools. What about
undressing yourself? It's certainly warm enough," said Pengolod, and Aranwë
removed his black cloak and red tunic, leaving it at that for the moment.
Pengolod
grew sombre, then, for Aranwë bore many scars. He reached up to stroke first
the brand-scar on Aranwë's right arm; the rune of the elf-men of Maedhros
needed no explanation. Two faint lines below the collar-bones Pengolod touched,
and murmured, "From your Mírdain's rite." Aranwë nodded. Next, he
touched the fine, sinister lines that cut hard at intervals along Aranwë's
chest, too precise to be a warrior's wounds. "How came you by these?" he
asked, softly.
"Ansereg,"
he answered. "Not here; in Gondolin."
"Ah,"
said Pengolod. After feeling the scar-lines out with his fingers, he bent his
dark head and ran his mouth across them, mapping out a place that now existed
only in memory. When he turned back up, Aranwë was stricken by the mingled
sympathy and sorrow in his face, reading the elf-man's grief that so little of
the past remained.
Aranwë
felt in himself again a flicker of the power from the ritual, a touch of uncanny
heat in the plain ring he wore. As he had given that fire and good will to
Celebrimbor then, he turned it to Pengolod now, channelling it not by song but
through a deeper, longer kiss. When they parted to breathe, Pengolod turned his
head against Aranwë's shoulder, leaning in, tension shuddering out of him as Aranwë
caressed.
The
smith whispered in the language of the lost city, honing its crisp, distinctive
accent. "I remember how you were then, bright and wise," he said, drawing a
hand down Pengolod's back, all the way to his hardened rider's thighs.
"Wise and fair. As you are now, too fair for a knave like me. But I shall have
you anyway."
"And
without delay," agreed Pengolod.
Aranwë
unlocked their solder-hot embrace and unbuttoned his leggings, then firmly drew
Pengolod around. The loremaster, facing the table, lifted the stoneware lid of
the sword-grease jar and dipped a curious finger. Aranwë leaned in, fencing
Pengolod between his arms and the bench, and scooped half a handful out of the
jar.
"This
stays where you put it, more soothing than thin oil," Aranwë said, feeling
his partner start as he applied the generous grease. He did not spare the
loremaster's measure in this, delighting in the other elf-man's arousal.
When Aranwë moved his touch back further, Pengolod leaned over the table; by
his tightness against the smith's exploring fingers, not all the tension had
left him. Aranwë was unsteady in turn as he edged in to lubricate his hardness
by sliding it between his partner's slicked cleft. The friction of that narrow
backside that moved to meet him was almost enough to make him spend.
"Are
you certain you wish this?" he asked.
Pengolod
turned back with the fiery look of one tempted to the edge. "Eictho-ni,
hecilo," he half-whispered, voice sharp and sibilant.
Riven
by that demand, Aranwë forced his tool inside, and they both cried out. "You
asked for this," Aranwë growled, seizing his partner's hips in a bruising
grip, sheathing himself fully.
Aranwë
stabbed him deep, taking him hard, blinded and burning in it. He remembered
himself enough to reach about for the other elf-man's cock, working him in
long strokes even though he could scarcely stay standing. He started as
Pengolod's hand came down over his. Beneath his hard use, the master of
tongues was left with only one word, but that word, beyond all his expectations,
was yes. Between sound and sensation, he lost himself and came.
The
loremaster found his tongue again, leaning back and gasping, "Ai, I felt that,
I felt you spend inside me, I never--" then spending himself against Aranwë's
loosened grip.
They
slid apart, Pengolod slumping against the table to collect himself, Aranwë
staggering to lean against the solid furniture. He noted a trace of blood and
braced himself for a pained expression when Pengolod turned to him. But
apologies froze in his mouth when he saw the look on Pengolod's face,
untouched by pain. The loremaster was still sad, but lit by peace; carrying a
look that said memory was fulfilled and enough, and in that finding freedom from
time.
"Are
you—was that--all right?" he whispered. Pengolod closed his eyes and
breathed deep, then smiled an illuminated smile. And nodded.
As
they embraced again in the light of the jeweler's furnace, in his rejoicing
heart Aranwë blessed the Elven-Rings, and the magics Annatar had brought the Mírdain
for that hour.
Part
5. Ash Nazg Thrakatuluk.
Sauron
stood in a dry, ash-strewn land, on the slopes of the greatest volcano in
Middle-Earth, and looked directly south. He was pleased; the work of raising a
great tower was nearly done, the folk of Lake Núrnen both the first of his
thralls and his overseers. In their past they had never ventured north to the
lands of the Elves, so no word of their change had come to the immortal folk. It
had been seven generations since he had bound the men of Núrnen to his
service, before he took himself to Eregion, and rebellion was near to forgotten
in his new order. Would that the Elves were half so easy to win and teach, he
thought. On the other hand, mortals eventually escaped him through death.
Binding the Elves to him would be a far more enduring victory.
As
he thought of the Elves, he turned his mind their way. In his time in Eregion,
he had drunk in every piece of knowledge he could about the Elves and their
customs, and traced his spirit's intuition among many of them. They often did
their great rites, weddings and final makings, on the day of their New Year, and
so he turned his mind to them often when that day fell; he had sensed them at
their Ring-making in recent years on that date. He stood there for a long time.
Darkness began to fall as he closed his eyes in meditation, sending his spirit
forth to feel and watch. Even if he had not been focused on them, he would have
felt the echo of the Music of the Ainur, and the fine net of power that spread
out over the Elves' places after their Ring-making was complete.
Sauron
opened his eyes, nostrils flaring. His hour was come at last.
He
turned around to face the mountain of fire, the mountain of doom, the core of
his power in Middle-Earth. A fissure had opened in its side over the centuries
since he had taken shape there. Walking up to it, he exerted some of his
Maia's powers to smooth it into a tunnel. Then he took up the tools he had
borne in anticipation and walked down it.
The
tunnel plunged into the heart of the mountain, to the level of its magma-pit.
The pit was cool, this year, its plunge surrounded by a firm ledge of rock, and
the light inside was faint from the crater overhead. On the black rock Sauron
laid out his tools; a crucible on a long handle, a ring-mold ready for casting,
a forming spar, several hammers, a pair of pliers. Into the crucible he placed
blobs and pieces of metal filched from the Mírdain's workshops. They were the
scraps from the making of the Rings of Men and the Rings of Dwarves.
Then he took the golden collar, sign of his membership in the Mírdain,
from around his neck. With the pliers and his hidden strength, he cracked open
one, two, five of its heavy links, and added the rich metal of three links to
the crucible. The rest of the collar he set aside.
Sauron
placed all the tools in order again. He listened to the near-dormant rumble of
the earth; the volcano was grown quiet these past centuries. It might have slept
in peace if Sauron had not called it to him. Down into his own core he reached,
exerting more will than he had for four hundred years, and sang a deep, grinding
song, pulling magma up from the depths. The ground moaned in agony. The cooled
cap of stone cracked and spread, opening up its fire. The pit refilled with
glowing magma, and the power of its heat and light illumined the mountain's
core and the mountain's master. Now limned in fire and shadows, Sauron
continued to sing as he held the crucible to the stone-pit's heat, tilting it
to blend the melting metals.
Sauron's
might exceeded that of the Elves for this making. As he sang, he reached out
with his mind to alloy all the different metals, steel, mithril, and chiefly
gold, together into a perfect blend, locked together by his will, suffused with
the heat of magma and his own will. He did not need to let the metals linger in
nature to absorb the world's powers; he did not need to repeat power-bindings.
His chant reached up to the roof of the mountain's crater, and ash fell from
the walls, stone crumbled, obsidian was shattered anew.
What
had begun as a song was now a deep, unreal, multi-layered sound. It would have
burst the mind of any elf or man who heard it. All his powerful will, and his
denied rage, he poured into the sound and the metal. Then the horrible music
shifted to become piercing, shatteringly sweet. It evoked all the beauty and
seduction he had at his disposal, and that was very great, all the desirability
of power and wielding that will, the fire of his Maia's body and the fire of
his will uniting.
The
crucible's contents glowed white-hot, and he poured the metal into the mold. A
little excess metal dripped out. Touching the mold, he sucked out the heat so
that the metal was shocked cold and still, brilliantly annealed, and with the
same gesture cracked the mold open. Sauron removed the rough ring, snapped off
the stem of metal from its casting, and placed it around the spar. He hammered
it to round it a touch, still singing, putting his will to beat down any who
defied him into the hammer's blows. Then he took the Ring, warmed from the
belabouring, and held it between his hands, smoothing it with the same power
that had cooled it.
As
the climax, with heat of his mind he incised the very words of power that he
chanted into the Ring, with craft to exceed any elf. It was the first time he
spoke in the new language of power he would teach his Men and Orcs.
Ash
nazg durbatuluk!
Ash
nazg gimtabul!
Ash
nazg thrakatuluk ag burzum-ishi krimpatul!
The
faint light that came through the crater's opening dimmed to darkness as the
words rolled from his lips and were branded into the heart of the One Ring. One
ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them, One Ring to bring them all and in
the darkness bind them.
The
earth roared in fiery release.
Sauron
stood there in the wind that whirled through the dome, carrying up foul fumes,
and held his making high, the One Ring glowing red.
As
Sauron stood separate from the Ring, his golden beauty was dimmed. The tones of
his skin and hair became brassy, his eyes more evilly green than chrysoprase
blue. The One Ring glittered and shone, radiantly lovely; much of the power that
gave him his beauty had been poured into it, to be magnified. The being and the
jewel were inextricably linked.
Lust
swept him. So tempting to don it immediately! But such haste would be his ruin,
the fall of all his plans. The One Ring was linked neatly to the rings of Men
and Dwarves, and to the Elves' works, but not yet to the Elven-Rings. He
needed to return to Eregion one last time to do this thing. Then the Ring would
be the height of the pyramid of dominance and order.
Sauron
knelt to the broken collar. He took the two sundered links and placed the One
Ring between them, bidding it to shrink in size to match the other links. Then,
with the pincers, he pinched the open links shut. The One Ring's smooth
roundness did not match the flattened oval links of the collar's chain, but it
was to the back, where it would be hidden by his long hair.
He
clasped the collar around his neck again, tighter than before, so that all the
links pressed into him. As he placed the Ring fully next to his skin, his beauty
flared forth bright again, as tempting as before, even more so, magnified by the
linking Ring, which allowed him to draw more than ever on the world's power.
Once he wore the Ring on his hand, his fairness would be more terrible
than the Sun, and wither lesser ones who looked on him, if he willed it.
Sauron
indulged in a laugh of anticipation, and the earth rumbled in response. He
turned and left that place as magma began to ooze up further and become lava.
The Mountain of Fire would erupt that night. Not even Sauron could turn back the
roused earth's fires, or undo work that had been done.
Part
6. One For The Dark Lord.
A
week after the Elves' New Year, the weather in Eregion was cold to the point
of being unseasonable. There were some compensations. The trading-party of
Lindon was glad to linger amidst the weird peace cast by the Elven-Rings, though
rumour whispered that none had donned the jewels of power yet; they were still
held by Celebrimbor. The strange weather and clouded days brought the loveliest
sunsets of hundreds of years, the sky's brilliance rivalling the Mírdain's
multi-hued glasswork.
When
Sauron rode back to Eregion, he arrived at the doors of the Mírdain in the
midst of such a sunset, his white robes hued gold in the light. There was great
joy at his coming unexpectedly, but he set all others aside for Celebrimbor. The
twain soon retired to take counsel, as Sauron had planned. Like other unwed
smiths, Celebrimbor's lodgings were in the house of the Mírdain, and they
soon entwined on the bed, as Sauron had planned. And when matters began to go
awry, he recovered himself soon enough.
"Have
you grown fairer through your goodly deeds? You seem more beautiful than
ever," asked Celebrimbor, stroking back his hair in wonder, and Sauron
flinched back, lest the elf touch the One Ring too soon.
"No
more fair than you are grown strong," Sauron said. "I felt your song of
power even afar, and came to congratulate you, and see your fairest works. Where
are the Elven-Rings?"
"Back
where they lay when we were enchanting them," said Celebrimbor, and Sauron sat
upright at that.
"How
odd. By the radiance of your land, I thought surely you wielded them," he
said, smoothly.
Celebrimbor
shook his head. "I must decide which one to keep for Eregion, and they are all
such wonders I cannot choose, all precious to me. I tried each in turn briefly,
and…" He sighed. Sauron suffered his kiss and picked up the traces of one of
the plans he had readied. If he had been able to touch one of the elf-rings, his
work would have been done in an instant. Still, this would suffice, to touch the
one who had worn them.
"Have
you broken your celibacy yet?" Sauron purred.
"No.
Not very like me, is it?" Celebrimbor laughed. "The ecstasy of making the
Rings has been so great that only your love could match it. I have been
continent before this last rite, as well; you have spoiled me for lesser
ones."
"My
love?" asked Sauron, raising one golden eyebrow.
Celebrimbor
realized his mistake. "Your passion, your giving, your - " He gave up.
"Annatar, I am an Elf. Not a mortal to use you for mere passion's sake, and
not a Maia to be above attachments for higher matters. You have some of my
heart. How could I not care for you, who made our greatest works possible, and
who have taken more from me than any other?" Sauron lowered his head at the
unknowing truth of his last words. Taken more indeed.
Sauron
said nothing, and let the elf's anxiety rise. He rose from the bed and stood
against one of the room's windows, his frame outlined against the last traces
of the vermillion and violet sunset and the blue night coming down.
"Perhaps
it is fitting that you love me," Sauron mused. "But there are greater things
in this world than love, I ween. There is power; there is order; there is what
is right. And this I would embrace in you, in the way of the body, as you taught
me."
Celebrimbor
arose from the bed, his expression guardless with hunger. "Will you come to me
as you did before? To kneel before me?"
"Yea,
and take from you everything you have to give. Walk you your circle of ansereg
and take up your tools," bade Sauron. "We shall surpass everything we have
known in our congress before. Thy very spirit I will touch, before this night is
through." Before the window, he fell to his knees, and Celebrimbor stood
before him, both of them limned black against the evening's fading light.
They
did not fall to immediately, for Celebrimbor's aide came to light the lamps
and pour golden wine. The aide said little when his elf-lord stalked around the
room, restless with domineering lust, and commanded him sharply to lay out some
linen towels, and pour out some spirits. The aide had seen this before, and
before he left laid out a small ebony coffer banded with mithril, and
Celebrimbor thanked him for this. He snapped the coffer's lid open.
"Kneel," he said, and Sauron stepped out of his white robe and knelt where
the wooden floor had been inlaid with a varied ring of wood.
Sauron
refused nothing; not a crisp blow that struck his face, not words of fealty that
Celebrimbor demanded (and Sauron read him anxious still thereby), not his
body's stillness beneath a whirling belt, not the blood that flowed. He put
all his will to being more radiantly focused than ever before, listening for
every step and shift. No, he did not love Celebrimbor. But it occurred to Sauron
how it might have been if he had, when last clad in a body, given himself to the
Dark Lord so, to Morgoth. What might their sport have been? That thought helped
him tolerate what the elf-man did next to him.
The
toys of ansereg were never more splendid than in the chamber of the lord of the Mírdain.
Each flail was worked and gilded, and the coffer held devices of pure metals,
picked out in pinpoints of ruby and adamant. Celebrimbor, some of his
overwrought emotion spent, had taken up a chain of gold, two handspans in
length, with two pinching clips at each end, fashioned in soft gold as
serpent's heads. He closed the clips around Sauron's tawny nipples, and like
serpents they bit. Further to this he took up more clips of gold, each one with
its tiny flaring grips engraved and shaped with black wit as the wings of a
wasp. Some had rough gold where they clasped the flesh, and some had tiny teeth.
They made the flesh around them crawl, stung and flushed, then drain paler than
the skin about.
Celebrimbor
studded him with many of these cruel jewels, along his chest and flanks, along
the tender sides of his arms, even, humiliatingly, along his thighs and nipping
the base of his cock. Sauron felt the Ring throb against his neck, but forced
his fury at the goading sensations down. "Why this torment, lord?" he asked.
Celebrimbor
stood above him, his voice that of a dreamer. "These I had made against your
return, fairest one; they have bitten no other. The way the clamps draw out your
flesh," he said, shifting one with a finger's touch, "seeing your skin
redden, less perfect, makes you more like to us Elves. And to have you endure my
making reminds us both that you are of the Mírdain, one of the jewel-men. You
swore your oath, and tonight, tonight I claim you anew." He drew a caressing
hand about Sauron's neck and gripped the collar of the Mírdain, as Sauron had
planned.
He
gave Celebrimbor long service with his mouth, then, and the elf-lord cried out
to feel the Maia's hunger as he drew hard. One of Celebrimbor's hands sank
into his hair, twisting and pulling, and the other one kept its grip on the
collar. "Ai, many arts you gave us, Annatar, but this one I gave to you!" He
pulled Sauron's head back and gazed stern and wild into his eyes. "The best
of my makings is your desire, fairer than ring or gem. Take me, drink me
down!"
Sauron
dove, because Celebrimbor's wish matched his wiles perfectly; he had known how
the stallion would run when he laid the traces, and he looked up to share his
sure expression of satisfaction and desire fulfilled. Celebrimbor's grip was fading as the rest of him stiffened
towards release, and Sauron placed one of his hands to hold the elf-smith's
hand at his neck, so that his touch would be conducted through the collar, to
the One Ring.
In
brief defiance, Sauron pulled back and said quickly, "Give it all to me!" As
he endured the shaft in his throat again, he thought of the notes of his music
in his mind, and turned all his Maia's power to drawing in everything of
Celebrimbor. With a cry like one of
anguish, Celebrimbor came, a hard release and not swift after such a long
denial.
Soon
after, Celebrimbor cut short their rite and released the circle, weary unto
staggering, grown gentle again. "Thank you, my friend," he breathed. "I
needed that. Tomorrow, I shall be myself again." His hands never left Sauron,
caressing where the marks faded almost instantly from the golden skin.
In
the heart of the starry night, as Celebrimbor slept, Sauron slipped away. The
horses quivered with terror in the stables as he came and drew his black steed
to the ready. The enslaved Mearas was barely bound, even by Sauron's will, to
tolerate him who all good beasts loathed. He mounted and rode to a stony rise
overlooking the house and outbuildings of the Mírdain, then dismounted and
looked into the valley below him. The dome of stained glass was lit, an immense
jewel in the night, boasting the power of the Mírdain to all for miles around.
The city of Ost-in-Edhil had its lights but it was pale, veiled in the
night-mists that came up from the lowlands. Sauron dimly sensed that some elves
were within at their sport of ansereg. He reached up and tore the collar of the Mírdain
from his throat one last time.
He
cast it to the granite-stone beneath his feet, and at his will the loosened
links cracked. From the collar's wreck, Sauron plucked out the one whole loop;
his Ring. Savoring the moment, he held it in his hand. Patience had brought him
to this hour; he could spare a moment to gloat, for once. Even without donning
the Ring, he sensed the Elves more than he ever had before. The minds of those
who wore the lesser rings seemed very near. Sauron looked up in hatred at the
Moon and scattered stars, signs of defiance from the chaos-loving Valar, who
hated the pure dark. Perhaps he would even cast the lights of heaven down, by
the time he was done ordering Arda. He inhaled, and closed his eyes to salute
the darkness pure. It was time.
Again
he spoke his words of power and darkness, and they rang down the sloping hills
of Eregion. Then he thrust his finger into the One Ring. Dark heat ran through
him, and he cried out, a fell cry, and shivered as his making took him. He felt
himself aligned into increased order; the smallest parts of his being were
brought to greater power and perfection. Magnificent!
Sauron
reached out with his mind, and felt something pulsing back at him; the myriad
sparkling wills of the elven-race, as disorderly as the stars above. He grasped
all he could sense in the grip of his ordering will.
And
by the cries of horror that rang through the night, it seemed like the house of
the Mírdain itself screamed.
He
laughed in his black bliss, and then scowled. Scorched by the touch and
knowledge of Sauron, the elf-minds were growing fainter. They were foregoing
their power, taking off their rings. When they succumbed, when they took up the
power that was waiting for them, he would have them! They might use the great
Rings and fall to him; or set them aside and, weakened, fall before him. Either
way, he would rule them all, and in the darkness bind them. His long anger
undimmed, he lifted the hand where the Ring shone, and reached out to burn the
mind of Celebrimbor. Deny me not, you who had a care; take up your Rings, and
know true order. Here is a taste of what refusal will bring! Then he
gestured at the dome of the Mírdain, using the Ring's power for the first
time.
In
a brilliant explosion, the glass roof shattered.
Sauron
reeled. The magnified power was greater than he expected. He would have to
master this, and then hammer his order down, starting with Eregion. With harsh
words of the Black Tongue, he bid his steed kneel, and mounted anew. The black
horse bolted beneath him, screaming its terror into the night like a wraith, but
its fear served Sauron well. He let it carry him beyond the reach of the alarmed
Elves.
Next:
They Knew Themselves Betrayed.
Counsels of desperation are taken. War
sweeps apart and brings together. Sauron and Celebrimbor's final
confrontation. Conclusion and Epilogue.
Story
Notes:
Disr
The quarters of many of the Mírdain = Based on a 9th-century layout of a monastic community's goldsmithing and blacksmithing workshops.
Lesser
rings = There are references in The Silmarillion, "the Elves
made many rings..." and in The Fellowship of the Ring to these
lesser rings; their existence is why Gandalf tests Frodo's ring to try and
draw out the fiery letters.
We
Lambengolmor = Literal translation "masters of tongues."
Eichto-ni,
hecilo = Literal translation from Quenya "Pierce me, outlaw." The word
"eichto" means to pierce or prick; it also means to insult or goad.
An
enslaved Mearas = A horse of the same breed as the surpassingly swift
Shadowfax.